Essay revision + add on page!!

PLEASE REVISE THIS ESSAY OF MY ROUGH DRAFT. I ALSO ADDED ANOTHER PAGE THAT PROVIDES THE THESIS STATEMENT NEEDED AT THE END OF THE INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH. I WANT TO CHANGE THIS ROUGH DRAFT BY TALKING ABOUT HOW COMEDY AFFECTS SOCIAL CHANGE ESPECIALLY WITH SOCIAL ANXIETY, ETC. FAILURE TO WRITE EXACTLY WHAT IS NEEDED WILL RESULT IN A NEGATIVE REVIEW. PLEASE READ EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!