I wrote a paper for my anthropology class and i need help from someone who’s specialist in anthropology to revise it based

I wrote a paper for my anthropology class and i need help from someone who’s specialist in anthropology to revise it based on my professor’s comments, and make my paper stronger and more vivid by adding more info

below i attached:

1- a Word file of my essay

2- my professor’s comments on the essay

3- my syllabus requirements for the essay

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