i wrote three papers about three different topics for my anthropology class and i need help from someone

i wrote three papers about three different topics for my anthropology class and i need help from someone who’s specialist in anthropology to revise each one of my three papers, and make each paper stronger and more vivid by adding more info

below i attached:

1- pdf’s files of each essay

2- my professor’s comments on one of the essays

3- my syllabus requirements for each essay

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    essay1.pdf
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    essay2.pdf
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    essayy3.pdf
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    essay3.scanpdf.pdf
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    newdoc2019-05-0913.10.58_20190509131223.pdf
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    newdoc2019-05-0911.51.18_20190509115235.pdf