.Support the hypothesis. Delete biased wording about how the study will be used because you agree with what they say.

all that has to be done is to edit this paper I have attached with these following things below

Make sure all six of these things are done just read the paper and fix these issues below

1.Annotations: Evaluation of the Article: It is bias to only report on studies that

2.Support the hypothesis. Delete biased wording about how the study will be used because you agree with what they say.
3.Annotations: Comparison to Other Sources: the studies were largely not compared to each other
4.Annotations: Limitations: It appears that you only covered one limitation of a couple studies. This should be done with all of them.
5.Articulation of Response: don’t restate entire titles in your text. Use APA citations. Authors last names and year published.

6. Avoid the use of personal pronouns. See the ‘Writing Expectations’ class announcement for details!!

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